quickimage2002 operator
المساهمات : 50 تاريخ التسجيل : 04/10/2007 العمر : 43
| موضوع: ...........I used to.......... الأحد أكتوبر 14, 2007 2:59 pm | |
| IUsed To…. I used to have dreams … Many Different happy dreams… Where the doors were opened…. And the lights were on.. The joy was there.. And the pains were gone.. The sky was dark blue.. And so shiny was the sun.. Birds.. butterflies.. roses were there.. I was all the time having fun.. I used to have dreams … But.. I used to have them disappeared.. I woke up .. look around.. every thing had gone.. The doors are locked.. the lights are off.. The shines went back .. the sky became dark.. The birds flew away.. and no place for fun.. It's really unfair.. To have all your life.. as a night mare…!! But,… I Used To
عدل سابقا من قبل في الأحد أكتوبر 14, 2007 3:31 pm عدل 2 مرات | |
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sarajoe70 user
المساهمات : 24 تاريخ التسجيل : 03/10/2007
| موضوع: I like that الأحد أكتوبر 14, 2007 3:23 pm | |
| dear: that was a very good try . you seem to have your tools ready and thats fine . i like what you write in english very much . but on the other hand i have some grammatical points that I want to discuss with you 1. the joy (was) not were 2.the sky became or becomes (not become) but as a whole i like it especially: And so shiny was the sun | |
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quickimage2002 operator
المساهمات : 50 تاريخ التسجيل : 04/10/2007 العمر : 43
| موضوع: أهوى اللغة الانجليزية الأحد أكتوبر 14, 2007 3:32 pm | |
| تم التعديل و مشكور أبو فريد هي أخطاء مطبعية و سرعة كتابة لاني احفظها غيبا أشكرك | |
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